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15/10/2016 13:34:23

ziggy72Muvizu mogulExperimental user
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That's funny, and oddly accurate - there's a brilliant little website called http://www.superdickery.com/ where it shows every example (in the comics) of Superman being a total tool to all and sundry. He does it ALL the time!!
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15/10/2016 14:01:59

PatMarrNCMuvizu mogul
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hahaha... I like the idea of drunk Superman. Sort of an anti-hero... interesting concept!

I like the scene at 0:45 where he blows everything into the distance

at 1:08 where he takes the motorcycle bandit into space and kills him, we learn that Superman can be a mean drunk (Nice job animating the weightlessness of space)

at 1:26 where he kicks away the bat signal.. I'm guessing that's to show a drunken and petty jealousy toward the attention other superheroes get?

at 1:47 I didn't understand the significance of the jail cell scene.. (but it was well done visually)

I think you do a good job of portraying your scenes visually in Muvizu, but your storyline requires the viewer to make assumptions about what's happening. I think it's risky to rely on the audience's discernment, as some people will not bother and just dismiss your video because they didn't get it.

One way to guide the interpretation is what you did at the beginning when you showed text clearly stating that this video is about how Superman might act if he was drunk. Follow-up descriptions for each scene might be overkill, but it would make it more likely that viewers will come away with the point you intended to make.
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15/10/2016 20:50:40

AllClass
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I'll check it out Ziggy!

Thanks for watching and also to Pat for the great comments

I've posted the full version of this so might delete this one, cheers
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15/10/2016 23:47:48

Rocque
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I enjoyed the video, but as a kid I would have been completely saddened by it. Superman was one of the good guys all the time, and could not possibly ever want a day off. Now that I have adult humor, I appreciate what you did. I loved him kicking the batman spotlight. I can see him doing that drunk or sober.

You have great ideas in this video. I applaud your imagination. I thought the flying was great, and one day want to attempt making a video with more flight in it.

Thanks for sharing with us. You are doing great!
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